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    <name>XML as a cognitive tool for constructing argumentative texts</name>
    <authors>Kalli Benetos</authors>
    <date>02-06-2005</date>
    <updated>11-07-2005</updated>
    <goal>
        <title>Develop an XML grammar for constructing argumentative essays.</title>
        <description>The goal of this project will be to develop an XML grammar that can be used as
            a tool to help children learn to construct persuasive and argumentative texts that also
            consider the opposing view. </description>
    </goal>
    <state-of-the-art>
        <p>
            <strong>on providing tools/aids for writing persuasive/argumentative texts</strong>
        </p>
        <p>Much of the literature reviewed seems to show negative or inconclusive results when
            providing computer-based structural support, but much of the support given is
            grammatical rather than content oriented or the literature dates from over a decade ago
            when the interfaces of the tools presented were cumbersome. One study that may have been
            very revealing does not detail the form of the support given (medium or content) but
            only superficially defines &quot;structural&quot; and
            &quot;content&quot; support. </p>
            <ul>
                <li>
                    <a
                        href="http://www.nycenet.edu/NR/rdonlyres/5CF749A8-D90F-4646-BEAF-9DD3130EB82E/2716/AppendixC.pdf"
                        >Using Rubrics to Promote Thinking and Learning</a> - an example of the use
                    of rubrics as an instructional tool in teaching persuasive essay writing.
                    (Results positive - rubrics well presented and defined with the participation of
                    students therefore could be the basis of the grammar of this project)</li>
                <li>
                    <a href="http://www.ncsu.edu/meridian/sum2004/cbconceptmapping/print.html"
                        >Computer-based Concept Mapping as a Prewriting Strategy for Middle School
                        Students</a> - compares computer-based concept mapping and word processor
                    vs. paper-based concept mapping and handwritten essay writing and the effects on
                    idea generation and structure/quality of essays. (Results inconclusive - more
                    idea generation, less structured essays - blamed on intrusion of word processing
                    tool (why they included this variable is not explained)</li>
                <li>
                    <a href="http://newmedia.colorado.edu/cscl/149.pdf">Using Tools and Resources in
                        Computer Supported Collaborative Writing</a> - investigates the relationship
                    between the use of the computer-based tools and resources the quality of the
                    argumentative texts produced collaboratively. (mixed results - inconclusive)</li>
                <li>
                    <a href="http://www.ucles.org.uk/assessmentdirectorate/articles/confproceedingsetc/BERA2001SG"
                        >A study of the effects of content and structural support in writing
                    tasks</a> - (Results inconclusive - support not computer-based, vague on the
                    form of the content and structural support given).</li>
            </ul>
        <p>
            <strong>on structuring persuasive and argumentative texts</strong>
        </p>
        <p>Tools seen or discussed (Drew, Cosar) are aimed at Computer support for collaborative
            writing (and learning) and are aimed at post-secondary students. I have found no tools
            aimed at learners beginning to write individual argumentative or persuasive essays. This
            leads to the consideration of the possibilities that either such a tool is not useful or
            has yet to be considered useful. </p>
            
            <ul>
                <li>
                    <a href="http://www.geocities.com/SoHo/Atrium/1437/index.html">The Five
                        Paragraph Essay</a> - thorough yet simple beginner resource to help people
                    write a simple five paragraph essay - defines the different types, expository,
                    persuasive etc.</li>
                <li>
                    <a href="http://www.polar.sunynassau.edu/~sherd/essay-tool.html">Tool for
                        writing persuasive essays</a> - an online tool (html form with cgi
                    scripting) to guide the user through the composition of an argumentative text,
                    but the &quot;guidance&quot; is not well presented and does not follow
                    any of the other structures for argumentation looked at.</li>
                <li>
                    <a
                        href="http://www.ltg.ed.ac.uk/edilog/papers/053.pdf"
                        >Towards a Framework for Rhetorical Argumentation</a> - the paper presents a
                    formal framework for rhetorical argumentation (rhetorical argumentation being
                    concerned with value judgements rather than logical merit). Very philosophical
                    approach that aims to define a 'formula' for argumentation. Interesting overview
                    of the Theory of Rhetorical Argumentation and the importance of sound rhetoric
                    in persuasive writing.</li>
                <li>
                    <a href="http://cctc2.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/argument.htm"
                        >&quot;Developing an Argument.&quot; Guide to Grammar and Writing</a>
                    - explores writing techniques and components of argumentative writing, with a
                    good explanation of the different types of faulty logic.</li>
                <li>
                    <a href="http://www.fas.harvard.edu/~wricntr/documents/Counterarg.html"
                        >&quot;Counter-Argument.&quot; The Academic Essay: A Brief
                    Anatomy</a> - explores writing techniques and components of countering an
                    argument within a persuasive essay. </li>
                <li>
                    <a href="http://eee.uci.edu/faculty/losh/Shakespeare/householder.html">The
                        Silent Debate</a> - more on including and structuring counter arguments in
                    persuasive essay writing. </li>
            </ul>
    </state-of-the-art>
    <research-development-questions>
        <question>
            <title>Can an XML grammar adequately represent the structure of a basic 5 paragraph
                argumentative essay?</title>
            <description/>
        </question>
        <question>
            <title>Can such a grammar be expanded to include opposing view arguments?</title>
            <description/>
        </question>
        <question>
            <title>Could rubrics be used to create the XML grammar so that it provides structural
                support for the writing task?</title>
            <description/>
        </question>
        <question>
            <title>What tools could be used to present the structure in an interface that can be
                easily used by children (10 and over)</title>
            <description/>
        </question>
        <question>
            <title>Is there a need for such a tool? What are the possible advantages over a pen and
                paper scenario?</title>
            <description/>
        </question>
        <question>
            <title>What are the main obstacles to using XML as a cognitive tool and what can be done
                to overcome these obstacles?</title>
            <description/>
        </question>
    </research-development-questions>
    <methodology>
        <ol>
            <li>Review some more relevant literature on the effects of providing structural support
                on essay writing</li>
            <li>Look at current tools available as aids to persuasive essay writing, whether
                collaborative or not - drew, essay tool mentioned above to see the structure behind
                the argumentation aids they provide</li>
            <li>Evaluate the rubrics presented in the literature and use them to develop a structure
                for a persuasive essay and break it down into its necessary and optional components</li>
            <li>Evaluate some XML editing tools (free or almost free) that can be potentially used
                by children or novice computer users.</li>
            <li>Test the product with one or two children and use the rubrics on which the structure
                is based to evaluate the results.</li>
            <li>Determine and analyse the difficulties encountered in the developement and use of
                the XML based tool.</li>
        </ol>
    </methodology>
    <workpackages>
        <workpackage>
            <planning>
                <from>27-05-2005</from>
                <to> 08-06-2005 </to>
                <hours-of-work>12</hours-of-work>
                <progress>100</progress>
            </planning>
            <objectives>
                <objective>
                    <title>Review more literature</title>
                    <description>Review some more relevant literature on the effects of providing
                        structural support on essay writing</description>
                </objective>
            </objectives>
            <deliverables>
                <deliverable>
                    <url/>
                    <title/>
                    <description/>
                </deliverable>
            </deliverables>
        </workpackage>
        <workpackage>
            <planning>
                <from>27-05-2005</from>
                <to> 08-06-2005 </to>
                <hours-of-work>3</hours-of-work>
                <progress>100</progress>
            </planning>
            <objectives>
                <objective>
                    <title>Look at current tools in use</title>
                    <description>Analyse the structure of the argumentation aid provided by some of
                        the current tools used in collaborative and individual
                    writing.</description>
                </objective>
            </objectives>
            <deliverables>
                <deliverable>
                    <url/>
                    <title/>
                    <description/>
                </deliverable>
            </deliverables>
        </workpackage>
        <workpackage>
            <planning>
                <from>08-06-2005</from>
                <to> 12-06-2005 </to>
                <hours-of-work>8</hours-of-work>
                <progress>100</progress>
            </planning>
            <objectives>
                <objective>
                    <title>Basic structure of the grammar</title>
                    <description>Evaluate the rubrics presented in the literature and use them to
                        develop a structure for a persuasive essay and break it down into its
                        necessary and optional components </description>
                </objective>
            </objectives>
            <deliverables>
                <deliverable>
                    <url>http://tecfa.unige.ch/staf/staf-k/benetos/staf18/grammar/ArgEssML.zip</url>
                    <title>ArgEssML.zip</title>
                    <description>Zip file containing all the deliverables relevant to using the XML grammar and schema developed</description>
                </deliverable>
            </deliverables>
        </workpackage>
        <workpackage>
            <planning>
                <from>12-06-2005</from>
                <to> 14-06-2005 </to>
                <hours-of-work>4</hours-of-work>
                <progress>100</progress>
            </planning>
            <objectives>
                <objective>
                    <title>Learn the basics of Relax NG</title>
                    <description>Complete online tutorial. </description>
                </objective>
            </objectives>
            <deliverables>
                <deliverable>
                    <url/>
                    <title/>
                    <description/>
                </deliverable>
            </deliverables>
        </workpackage>
        <workpackage>
            <planning>
                <from>12-06-2005</from>
                <to> 17-06-2005 </to>
                <hours-of-work>14</hours-of-work>
                <progress>100</progress>
            </planning>
            <objectives>
                <objective>
                    <title>Define grammar</title>
                    <description>Define the grammar using Relax NG </description>
                </objective>
            </objectives>
            <deliverables>
                <deliverable>
                    <url>http://tecfa.unige.ch/staf/staf-k/benetos/staf18/grammar/essay.rng</url>                 
                    <title>Relax NG schema</title>
                    <description>schema for defining the XML grammar to be used in constructing an argumentative essay - <a href="http://tecfa.unige.ch/staf/staf-k/benetos/staf18/documentation/">documentation</a></description>
                </deliverable>
            </deliverables>
        </workpackage>
        <workpackage>
            <planning>
                <from>12-06-2005</from>
                <to> 17-06-2005 </to>
                <hours-of-work>6</hours-of-work>
                <progress>100</progress>
            </planning>
            <objectives>
                <objective>
                    <title>Create an XML template file</title>
                    <description>Create a template file that will be used to write a persuasive
                        essay. </description>
                </objective>
            </objectives>
            <deliverables>
                <deliverable>
                    <url>http://tecfa.unige.ch/staf/staf-k/benetos/staf18/grammar/essay.xml</url>
                    <title>essay template in XML</title>
                    <description>blank essay template</description>
                </deliverable>
                <deliverable>
                    <url>http://tecfa.unige.ch/staf/staf-k/benetos/staf18/grammar/essay_fill.xml</url>
                    <title>Sample essay</title>
                    <description>sample of essay written while developing the grammar</description>
                </deliverable>
            </deliverables>
        </workpackage>
        <workpackage>
            <planning>
                <from>18-06-2005</from>
                <to> 20-06-2005 </to>
                <hours-of-work>10</hours-of-work>
                <progress>100</progress>
            </planning>
            <objectives>
                <objective>
                    <title>XSL Style sheet</title>
                    <description>Create a stylesheet for displaying the document once edited.
                    </description>
                </objective>
            </objectives>
            <deliverables>
                <deliverable>
                    <url>http://tecfa.unige.ch/staf/staf-k/benetos/staf18/grammar/essay.xsl</url>
                    <title>XSL style sheet</title>
                    <description>XSL style sheet for displaying input in a browser with structural aid text included.</description>
                </deliverable>
                <deliverable>
                    <url>http://tecfa.unige.ch/staf/staf-k/benetos/staf18/grammar/essay_done.xsl</url>
                    <title>XSL style sheet</title>
                    <description>XSL style sheet for displaying input in a browser without structural aid text.</description>
                </deliverable>
                <deliverable>
                    <url>http://tecfa.unige.ch/staf/staf-k/benetos/staf18/grammar/essay_print.xsl</url>
                    <title>XSL style sheet</title>
                    <description>XSL style sheet for displaying input in a browser without structural aid text.</description>
                </deliverable>
            </deliverables>
        </workpackage>
        <workpackage>
            <planning>
                <from>21-06-2005</from>
                <to> 22-06-2005 </to>
                <hours-of-work>4</hours-of-work>
                <progress>100</progress>
            </planning>
            <objectives>
                <objective>
                    <title>Style sheet</title>
                    <description>Create a CSS stylesheet for displaying the document once edited.
                    </description>
                </objective>
            </objectives>
            <deliverables>
                <deliverable>
                    <url>http://tecfa.unige.ch/staf/staf-k/benetos/staf18/grammar/essay.css</url>
                    <title>CSS style sheet</title>
                    <description/>
                </deliverable>
                <deliverable>
                    <url>http://tecfa.unige.ch/staf/staf-k/benetos/staf18/grammar/essay_print.css</url>
                    <title>CSS style sheet for a print version</title>
                    <description/>
                </deliverable>
            </deliverables>
        </workpackage>
        <workpackage>
            <planning>
                <from>23-06-2005</from>
                <to> 24-06-2005 </to>
                <hours-of-work>4</hours-of-work>
                <progress>100</progress>
            </planning>
            <objectives>
                <objective>
                    <title>Find XML editing tool</title>
                    <description>Evaluate and select an XML editing tool that can be easily used by
                        target learners. </description>
                </objective>
            </objectives>
            <deliverables>
                <deliverable>
                    <url>http://www.oxygenxml.org</url>
                    <title>OxygenXML</title>
                    <description>Chose Oxygen XML. 30 day free trial available.</description>
                </deliverable>
            </deliverables>
        </workpackage>
        <workpackage>
            <planning>
                <from>25-06-2005</from>
                <to> 28-06-2005 </to>
                <hours-of-work>6</hours-of-work>
                <progress>100</progress>
            </planning>
            <objectives>
                <objective>
                    <title>Testing</title>
                    <description>Test the product with one or two children (10 years old or more). <em>Will test with an adult due to unavailability of appropriate tester</em>
                    </description>
                </objective>
            </objectives>
            <deliverables>
                <deliverable>
                    <url/>
                    <title/>
                    <description/>
                </deliverable>
            </deliverables>
        </workpackage>
        <workpackage>
            <planning>
                <from>28-06-2005</from>
                <to> 30-06-2005 </to>
                <hours-of-work>5</hours-of-work>
                <progress>100</progress>
            </planning>
            <objectives>
                <objective>
                    <title>Evaluation and analysis</title>
                    <description>Evaluation and analysis of test results. </description>
                </objective>
            </objectives>
            <deliverables>
                <deliverable>
                    <url/>
                    <title/>
                    <description/>
                </deliverable>
            </deliverables>
        </workpackage>
        <workpackage>
            <planning>
                <from>1-07-2005</from>
                <to> 05-07-2005 </to>
                <hours-of-work>6</hours-of-work>
                <progress>100</progress>
            </planning>
            <objectives>
                <objective>
                    <title>Paper</title>
                    <description>Respond to research questions presented. </description>
                </objective>
            </objectives>
            <deliverables>
                <deliverable>
                    <url>http://tecfaseed.unige.ch/staf18/modules/ePBL/uploads/proj7/paper4.xml</url>
                    <title/>
                    <description/>
                </deliverable>
            </deliverables>
        </workpackage>
    </workpackages>
</project>

